Band 4+: Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my opinion, competitive sports in the education of teenagers have both positive and negative effects that some people think.

The first advantage of competitive sport is working as a team. This can teach teenagers to work with others even though they do not know each other. Next, they can do something under the pressure because it has lots of problems during the competitive sports. They will learn how to resolve from these problems.

However, the competitive sport can make teenagers feel ambitious. Some of them, especially players, want to win every competition. They will not admit the result when they lose. And another disadvantage is conflict. It can happen in the competitive sport. If they have agreement all the time, it will impact on their working.

To sum up, it has many reasons that you can learn from the competitive sport. Even though it has negative effect, but we can prevent and find the solution to address the issues. It is not only competitions teenagers will be enjoyable, sharing the best moment with their friends and family.