🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Discussion

Band 6+: Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

Some argue that competitive sports have many benefits on education for younger people while others believe that such activities may negatively impact the student. Although engaging in sports such this may increase rivalry among students, I believe it has more advantages such as good physique and improve concentration which are important for learning.

On the one hand, competitive sports such as swimming or basketball may result in a rivalry atmosphere. This is because such sports usually offer a reward for the winner that makes a teenager feel better about themselves when winning. Consequently, if a student loses in a sports competition, she may feel less about herself which may decrease her self-esteem. This may later affect her academic performance in school, resulting in poor grades and even failing the classes. Furthermore, some teenagers may focus more on sports than classes, making them pay less attention to their education.

On the other hand, engaging in competitive sports has many benefits for teenagers. Firstly, it improves their physical and mental health. This is because the more they exercise, the more their body builds muscle, which is very important in maintaining well-being. Many research studies suggest that doing sports from an early age will decrease the risk of illnesses such as diabetes, obesity, and even depression. Another benefit is it will increase their concentration and focus on classes. I believe these advantages are more important for teenagers so they should do more sports.

To conclude, engaging in competitive sports may make teenagers build rivalry and stress due to losing the game, but such a condition can be prevented by teaching them the nature of competition and that losing is common in sports. Therefore, I believe these negative effects can be prevented by teachers and school because such activities have more advantages for the teenagers in both academics and well-being.

Word Count: 306

Essays On The Same Topic:

Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often debated that sports promote a competition among students instead of brotherhood and unity. While understanding the view point ,i strongly disagree. Sports play a vital role in keeping students active and healthy therefore, sports need to be continued at school. On the one hand, sports offer tremendous benefits to students, as they […]

Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views regarding whether sports activities have a positive effect on the education of teenagers, whileothers believe that the effect is negative. Although both perspectives have their own merits, I firmly believe that physicalexercises have a beneficial effect on the younger generation’s educational achievements. On the one hand, many people claim that involvement […]

Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The role of competitive sports in the education of adolescents has become a subject of considerable debate. While some argue that engaging in such activities fosters essential life skills and enhances academic performance, others contend that the pressures associated with competition can adversely affect a teenager’s well-being and academic pursuits. This essay will discuss both […]

Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, numerous schools are implementing some competitive kinds of sport in order to unite students. Some people believe that this is a good idea and in can be useful for pupils, while others assert that rivalry demotivate them. From my point of view, competition stimulate several skills in children which may prove beneficial in prospect. […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words

Nowadays, some individuals suppose that violence on television and in computer games has a negative impact on the environment. On the contrary, others consider that such statements have a decisive influence on human behavior. Personally, I believe that exposure to violence in the media can have harmful effects, especially on young people. Currently, many people […]

Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The influence of television on child development is a subject of considerable debate among parents and educators. While some argue that television has a predominantly negative impact on young minds, others contend that it serves as a valuable educational tool. In my opinion, although unregulated viewing is indeed harmful, television can be overwhelmingly beneficial when […]

Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some pensioners nowadays prefer moving to different countries. The main benefit is that these people would have exciting opportunities to explore new places. The main drawbacks of this trend are adaptation and being separated from family. One of the advantages of living in an unknown country for retired citizens is there are plenty of opportunities […]

Some believe that pets should stay at home at all times, while others feel they should be allowed outside the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals are convinced that pets ought to stay at home all the time, whereas others think they ought to be allowed outdoors. Although it is important to protect pets from dangers that may await outdoors, I still side with those who think that it is essential to allow pets to explore the outdoor world […]

Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. what is the causes and solutions to this problem

There are several difficulties students face in their lives, which require patience to overcome. In addition, adults have to encounter a wide range of challenges at school and at home. They will assess the cause of problem and adopt solution to overcome the issue in the upcoming paragraph. To commence with, adults face a considerable […]

Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. what is the causes and solutions to this problem

There are several difficulties [students] face in life, which require patience to overcome the problem. In addition, adults have to encounter a wide range of challenges in school and at home. They will access the cause of problem and [adopt] solution to overcome the issue in the upcoming paragraph. To commence with, adults face considerable […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.