🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 6+: The government should lower the budgets. On the arts in order to allocate more money to education to what extent do you agree?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

There is ongoing discussion as to whether the state should allocate less national funding on the arts, so that they could spend a considerable amount on the educational institutions. While there is less truth to this assertion, although I contend that spending more money for education ensures long-term success opportunities and assists in overall academic development , I concede that funding on creative subjects enhances theoretical skills, problem solving skills and comprehensive improvement.

On the one hand, it is understandable why some people advocate for the preference towards practical subjects. Proponents of this view point out that this supports children’s critical thinking skills, fosters cognitive abilities, and emotional well-being. Furthermore, through creative subjects like music, drawing and painting they learned how to think flexibly. For example, when a student learns how to play a musical instrument it improves the learner’s memory, coordination, and attention. Moreover, by painting and drawing children can express his sadness and happiness perfectly. Therefore, it is clear that this perspective holds significant merit.

On the other hand, I would argue that this viewpoint fails to consider the effective advantages of career prospects . This is largely because focusing on education helps children gain the knowledge and the skills required for having a good career. Nowadays, high qualifications are necessary to secure well-paid jobs. For instance, the scholars who are excellent in their academic studies often get admission to reputed and top universities which aid in shaping their future. Consequently, it is evident that overlooking this factor would be a grave mistake.

In conclusion, although funding more on education has certain advantages, I remain convinced that creative subjects cultivate comprehensive development and logical reasoning. Hence, the government should adopt a collaborative approach between the funding of education and arts as it is the most viable solution.

Word Count: 299

Other Topics:

Many countries are experiencing a widening gap between the rich and the poor. Some believe that governments should implement policies focused on wealth redistribution, while others argue that such measures stifle economic growth and individual initiative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The disparity between the rich and the people from marginalized communities is increasing in many nations. A large number of individuals firmly believe that the state authorities should take steps whereas a large number of people argue that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of themselves. I certainly agree to the point […]

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give our opinion.

Human society is often believed to badly affect to the world’s flora and fauna. Some think this trend can not be alter, while others argue that it can change through actions. Earth already have a big problem of extinction of plant and animals, which could negatively affect to the biodiversity. This is owing to the […]

Some people believe that plastic shopping bags damage the environemnt and their use should be prohibited. Other peope insist that consumers should have the right to choose whether they want to use a plastic bag o not. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Reducing environmental degradation due to human influence is one of the most pressing challenges currently faced by the entire world. Therefore, the effect of plastic shopping bags, and whether they should be prohibited or remain as an optional commodity, is a very relevant topic of contention. This essay argues for the complete restriction of the […]

Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people consider schools no longer essential because children can get information from the internet and study just as well at home. While it is true that the internet provides access to a vast amount of information, schools still play a critical role in a child’s education and development. Therefore, I disagree with the […]

To reduce urban congestion, some cities are considering banning all private vehicles from their central business districts, replacing them with automated public shuttle systems. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary sociey, a number of cities are eccentuating a new policy whereby indigens would be disallowed from driving their own cars, in replacement, boarding public tranport or bicycles is adviced. In my candid opinion, I strongly believe this is to be a negative development, and the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, this being my educated […]

In many countries, it is very easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, this causes some people to have problems with debts they cannot pay back. Do you think the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a growing trend of people obtaining credit cards due to the convenience they offer in today’s world. However, some individuals encounter serious problems when they are unable to repay their debts. While credit cards provide certain advantages, such as allowing people to make investments or cover expenses temporarily, I firmly believe that the […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.