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Band 9: To what extent do you agree or disagree? A big salary is more important than job satisfaction.

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It is argued that earning a good income is more valuable than finding a sense of fulfillment in work. A high and stable salary allows individuals to pursue hobbies outside of their job, creating opportunities for developing a well-rounded lifestyle, and helps avoid burnout that can occur when turning passions into income sources.

Firstly, hobbies can broaden one’s perspective and support overall well-being, especially for those with low job satisfaction. A well-paid position gives people the financial freedom to invest in their interests, which promotes growth in other areas of life. This can be more rewarding than relying on a passion for income, which may reduce enjoyment over time. For instance, having extra income allows individuals to take classes, hire tutors and coaches, or access better tools—all of which improve the quality and efficiency of their leisure time.

Secondly, keeping work and personal life separate greatly contributes to emotional balance and better organization. Turning a hobby into a career can create pressure to perform, even when mentally drained, leading to severe fatigue and disillusionment. When one’s income depends on a former passion, it may feel more like an obligation than a joy. On the other hand, maintaining a clear boundary between work and leisure allows people to engage in personal interests freely and enjoy a healthier relationship with both.

In conclusion, a well-paying job provides financial security and enables individuals to pursue fulfilling hobbies, which supports a balanced and sustainable lifestyle without blurring the line between work and personal life.

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