🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Positive And Negative

Band 5+: Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

There is a view that nowadays increasing number of individuals post their private information such as address, telephone, and credit card numbers, online to their daily needs like banking, shopping, and socializing. Despite some drawbacks, from my point of view, it is a positive development as many people can hack and get personal information.

On the one hand, nowadays, technology is advancing and creating more durable opportunities for hackers and criminals to attract people and harm them. This is because they can create false advertisements and links and if an individual view and press this, it will give all private information to hackers and criminals. Consequently, criminals and hackers can use such data where they want, for instance, they can simply gain financial resources from bank or use individual’s personal information for harmful purposes. However, these are only mere drawbacks, advantages of putting private information on the internet are far more important.

Despite these disadvantages, I view this development positively, because adding private data on the internet can create convenience for user. Firstly, it can save significant time as individual can immediately access to any website or social media platform because his or her information like personal code and phone number are already saved there. In other words, the majority of internet users are mainly office workers and students and they always rush to complete the task or report on time and it is very beneficial for them putting their personal information online to ger instant access. Moreover, some people have problems with memorizing and often forget their crucial information. For example, nowadays, as a result of technological advancement there are dozens of websites which people use daily and it is hard to remember all information so that is why it is important to save such personal data on these platforms.

In conclusion, while there are some negative sides of posting personal information online such as losing money and facing with problems, I firmly believe that the positive sides are more vital as they can introduce a number of benefits for individuals such as saving time and quick access to the internet.

Word Count: 352

Essays On The Same Topic:

Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays,an increasing number of people share their personal information online,including their name , phone numbers, as well as credit card numbers in order to do daily activities such as banking , shopping ,and socializing.While these trend offers some benefits ,I believe that it is an undesirable change On the one hand ,putting personal information online […]

Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays ,many peple share their personal data online ,including their names ,phone number and credit card numbers in order to do daily activities like banking ,shopping and communication. While this trend has somebenefits ,I believe it is a negative development because it can lead to serious security and privacy problems. One major drawbacks of putting […]

Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

In today’s technological world, people increasingly upload personal information online, such as their addresses, phone numbers, and banking details. This is a negative trend due to the growing risks of privacy violations and financial fraud. Sharing sensitive personal information online significantly increases the risk of identity theft and cybercrime. This means that criminals may exploit […]

Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

In the digital age, the growing number of individuals are sharing their personal details such as address, telephone and plastic card numbers online for various daily activities including banking, shopping, and socializing. Although this trend offers some certain benefits, I believe it poses significantly more potential risks and should be considered a negative development. Admittedly, […]

Today more people put their private information (address, telephone and plastic card numbers) online to do their daily activities (banking, shopping, socializing). Is it a positive or negative development?

Since more and more people are becoming dependent on online services, they have to keep their private details online. I firmly believe that this development is negative one, given the increased risk of cybercrime and privacy concerns. Firstly, the main problem is that valuable personal information becomes vulnerable. Although saving phone numbers or addresses can […]

See All

Other Topics:

Does international tourism preserve local culture or does it commodify and ruin it?

People love to visit countries. Learn the other cultures, having great time, taste different foods. Otherwise local public think tourism ruin their country and commodify it. But international trips are best way to discover new countries. First of all nowadays people do not want to learn things by searching. They want to experience and explore […]

The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the substantial advancement of the cutting-edge technology in the globalized world, the merits and drawbacks of the internet have became the center of fierce discussions. While certain groups opine that the internet provides an opportunity to keep in touch with close friends and relatives regardless of their location, there are still some individuals who […]

Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While some people argue that public transportation should be funded primarily through commuter fares, I believe that it should be entirely free for all residents. The strongest justification for this position is that free public transit significantly reduces urban traffic congestion and harmful carbon emissions. This is largely because removing financial barriers encourages a massive […]

Deforestation caused by human activities is happening in many parts of the worlds, with serious results for the government. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

The most widely discussed environmental issues is deforestation was done for human needs, and has a huge impact on habitat. However, this kind of activity is causing for several problems over the world, such as destroying wildlife environment. This essay will examine these issues and propose potential solutions. Firstly, various materials can be manufactured from […]

Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, fossil fuels play a major role in energy production worldwide. In some parts of the world, alternative energy sources are increasingly being used instead of fossil fuels. In my opinion, this is a completely positive development because it can avoid from environmental contamination and contribute to economic growth. One significant reason for using alternative […]

All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. ‎ To what extent do you agree or disagree?‎

There is a prevailing notion that fathers should always get a vacation from work when their child is born. Much as I ackmowladge drawbacks of this development, I completely agree with this notion, as parental accountability is crucial and fathers often face considerable pressure in that period. One principal advantage why fathers should be entilted […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Buy activation codes in bulk and give one to each learner. A code does not expire until it is used, and each subscription only starts counting once its code is entered, so you can buy now and hand them out later.

10+ codes: 10% off 25+ codes: 15% off 50+ codes: 20% off
The codes are emailed to your payment address as soon as the payment goes through, and are also shown on the confirmation page. A tax invoice is issued automatically at checkout — select Purchasing as a business there to put your organization's name and tax ID on it.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.