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Band 4+: We live in aa world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extend do you agree?

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The modern world is called ‘World of technology’. There are many benefits which lie on the internet. But here control and security of datasets overshadow advantages. I completely agree with this statement for the following reasons.

The first reason why I agree is that though internet has a lot of pros in our life, but there are lots of drawbacks. For example, nowadays most people use social media and many of them post personal information and photos themselves. However, this is greaer risk for them. Because they put their pictures and information about themselves without prohibition. The private data of individuals might caused in the hands of intruders and they can extort money. Therefore all we all need to be carefull with internet, there are serious problems in security.

On the other hand the most common web security challenges are online attacks to hack people’s bank account or accounts on online platforms by malicious individuals or groups. For instance, two month ago a man called me and when we talking he introuced himself as a bank employer. After long talking he wanted that I said him the security (CVV) number of my card. Certainly, I understood he was not who he introduced and end the call. There are many people who cannot distinguish bank workers from malicious persons.

In conclusion, I would have to say that I agree with the fact that web online has problems of control and security of information, especially of personal datasets, because information that is located on the web is vulnerable.

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