🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Discussion

Band 5+: Some people belive that hard working is important to succeed in life while others think money and appearance are the most important factors discuss both views and give your opinion

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

It is considered by some individuals that working hard is the key point to be successful in life, although others argue that wealth and image of person play an pivotal role .In spite of the fact that most people think like the latter one, I always believe that hard working can lead to bright future for some reasons ,such as gaining certain knowledge.

In today’s world ,most people are addicted to their jobs as well as their working environment and argued that they can get more achievements if they work hard in tendem with passion. To explain, with spending much time and concentration on their fields,they may not be face with variety of struggles, that is to say they can increase work quality and financial sides.As a consequence, individuals that do their bests in their job careers can easily get promotion in their personal lives.For example, according to the recent research,80%of successful entrepreneurs have spent 10hours in a day for their businesses.To contrast with human beings who work 4days in a week, people are proving that they can succeed in everything if they have addiction to their occupations.

Having said that,some think that other factors like money or appearance might play a crucial role in their lives to achieve success. The reason why they pay more attention for these factors is because of media’s popularity. If they have enough funds and also beautiful body shape ,they can be really successful in not only on media but also other fields ,such as their businesses . As a result ,they feel confidence which is considered really important for the future plans and ambitions .For example, 90%of social media celebrities were able to gain their popularity via spending much money .

To conclude, although wealth and appearance are accepted as main factors for great achievements by some individuals, others ,not exception me,believe that working hard and with strong passion can lead them to the bright future opportunities.

Word Count: 324

Other Topics:

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

In the past many people live in small villages and they had good communication with each other. Now, many people live in large cities and they are strangers to each other. What do you think were advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? First, when you live in small community everyone know each […]

Today many big cities in the world are increasing in size what are the problems associated with it what are the solution to this problems

Nowadays, number of people move to urban cities as a result the size of the city is increasing day by day. This essay would aim to discuss about problems and solutions. To begin with, there are number of reasons of this trend, but the primary reason is that when people live in the big cities, […]

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of waste produced?

In this modern era, people produce more and more waste. I believe that this happening because of over-packaging. To reduce the amount of trash produced, governments should implement strict rules. The main reason why individuals produce more and more rubbish is excessive packaging. Companies want their products to look interesting and protect them during transportation […]

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, many languages are being dying out every year. Many believe that this is not a critical issue, but instead their lives will be simpler. This essay will include why I mostly agree that disappearing languages do not need to be taken care off, and why life will be more easier. One school of thought […]

The only reason for learning a foreign language is work or travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people believe that work and travel are the only reason why people learn languages. I disagree with this idea, because some people simply find learning languages entertaining and enjoy the process of it. On the one hand, it is believed that language skills are important to work in abroad or for travelling. Given […]

The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

There is a common view that school curriculums should provide more physical lessons.I completely agree with this view because it health problems starts from childhood and it would provide them to change their perspective for healthy meals.Also it would help them to reduce their time on phones. One major reason is that health problems like […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.