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Band 5+: The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two bar charts comparing "Employment rates by country in 2005" and "Employment rates by country in 2015", each divided into "Male" and "Female" categories for Australia, Japan, and Ireland. In 2005, Australian males at nearly 80%, females around 65%; Japanese males just under 70%, females approximately 55%; Irish males approximately 75%, females around 55%. In 2015, Australian males close to 75%, females nearly 65%; Japanese males around 65%, females just above 55%; Irish males approximately 70%, females just under 55%.

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In 2005, the highest number of men who are in employment was observed in Japan, with around 72% of male workers while the lowest number of man staffs was identified in Australia, which was 61%. However, Japan spotted exactly 30% of women who were in work, which was the lowest percentages of female employees. Besides, Ireland recorded most women who are workers, which was more than 40%.

In 2015, Japan still had the highest number in men employees, with over 80% of men in work, while Australia spotted a significant increase in male staffs, and had the same number as Ireland. Moreover, the rates of woman employees in Australia rose tremendously and reached 55 percentage. Nevertheless, Japan still had the lowest number of female who have job.

In conclusion, both bar charts display the number of workers in three countries. There was an increase in both men and women staffs from 2005 to 2015.

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The report provides a reasonable overview of the main features of the charts, but some key information is missing or inaccurate.

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