Band 5: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, (User-Written IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that last week, my friends and I celebrated my birthday in your restaurant. We all really enjoyed to make a party in your place and it was so succed.

I would like to say that the food in your restaurant is very sweat and also make us very comfortable to eat it. Many types of food we could feel and choose, such as cakes, drinkings, and the others. All the variants of cakes were so delicious so that I made a package for my family at home. I do not forget to tell you about the service of your staffs, they made us feel happy while we were there, they were polite and suddenly do something what we need.

The situation in your restaurant was like in Japan style, so we were like in the other country. The groups of people around us did not distrub our party.

I have hope to make your restaurant be better in the next, your fans was not working so made us hot. Morever, the voice of your sound system could no be heard clearly. So make them all better.

Yours faithfully,

Ilham

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