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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with joy to appriciate your staff and food.Last week on 14th feb, me and my close friends were there to celebrate my birthday which was an amazing experience for us with your restaurant.

The most admirable part was your food specially we loved your butter chiken. Moreover, waiter and cook specially came in last to get feedback and to wish me with flowers which i have never experienced with any dining plcae.

Moreover,we felt very important as your staff made us to feel with special arrangments like decoration around table with ballons.Also they played music at the time of cake cutting. I really adore your place because of location,cleanliness, flowers and simple decoration which gives amazing feel to the customers.

Although I have a suggestion about parking area which had only 4 parking slots. People had to wait too long for parking becuase of this issue. I hope you will make some additional parking arrangments in future.

In the last, Thank you so much for making my birthday celebration memorable. I would like to eat more often with your restaurent.

Yours faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The content is relevant and fulfills the requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Some minor issues with cohesion are present.

Lexical Resource

5

A good range of vocabulary is used, although some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated. There is evidence of natural language use.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the score.

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