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Band 7+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter • explain why you want to reduce your working hours • say which hours you would like to work • describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I am going to study a three-week course which will be held in the next month. This course will be held on even days from 2 pm to 6 pm. So, I need to leave my work on these days at 1:30 pm instead of 4 pm. During this course, a well-known engineer in my field will teach the participants up-to-date procedures to be more effective both in teamwork and problem-solving. I will use this knowledge in my profession as much as I can and it will be my honor if I can teach these procedures to my colleagues.

I would appreciate it if you accept my request. I am waiting for your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Hamed

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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course: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task. It clearly explains the reason for reducing working hours, specifies the desired working hours, and describes the potential benefits for the employer. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, and the paragraphs are appropriately structured.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some effective word choices. The language is generally accurate and appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter displays a good command of grammar and punctuation. There are a few minor errors, but they do not significantly hinder comprehension.

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