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Band 4+: You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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Dear sir,

I hope you are doing very well. Iam writing you this letter about buy a house in your city United kingdom London, due to i got new job their and familiy visa as well.for parmanent with work permit which is need to buy a house there.

First of all, my name is Mukesh singh iam working in hotel sector and i have wife and tow kids both are boys which is also will come with me when i will get house there then my all familiy will move there . i had saw your agency in google when i was searching a good property agent in uk,then i made plan to write you a letter and express my feeling on this letter. because your agency ratting was top there so i rely to you.

sir i want a small house 3 bhk will be suitable for me and also in my buget because its my startup time so that will be fine .

my prefrence the location I would like near at bus stop it will be convinet for me and my familiy to because we will dont have car in begning thats why i perefer that location.so when you will got acording to my choice houce plese let me know as soon as possible.

i will looking forward to your repley,

your’e sincerly,

Mukesh singh

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 4

letter: 3

familiy: 3

there: 3

because: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The information is present, but could be organized more effectively for clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The letter's message is understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the flow and make it difficult to follow at times. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient for the task, but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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