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Band 7+: Look at the title and the graph about average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Melbourne. Write four introductory sentences about the graph using introductory verbs from the box on page 186. Try to use different sentence structures and vocabulary in each sentence.

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The image displays a line graph with three lines representing average temperatures in Paris, Dubai, and Melbourne over April, May, and June. Paris starts at around 8°C in April, increases to around 14°C in May, and around 22°C in June. Dubai begins at about 26°C, rises to approximately 30°C, and reaches nearly 34°C. Melbourne shows a decrease from about 17°C to 14°C and ends at roughly 11°C. The temperature scale ranges from 0°C to 35°C, increasing by increments of 5°C.

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The line graph depicts the data collected in Paris, Dubai, and Melbourne about the average temperatures over a three-month period, from April to June.

Overall, the temperature either grew steadily over the given period or declined gradually, with Paris being the hottest city of the three during all three months, and Melbourne and Dubai staying in the 17-degree range.

Talking about more detailed observations, Dubai had the lowest temperature of 10 degrees Celsius in April, whereas the average temperature in Paris was already 20 degrees in the same time frame. We do not see any drastic changes in the weather during the given period, as both of these cities experienced a rise of more than 10 degrees for Paris, and relatively rise of about 7 degrees for Dubai.

On the contrary, the trends of the average temperature in Melbourne gradually went down from 15 degrees Celsius in April to 10 degrees Celsius in June.

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degrees: 6

paris: 4

temperature: 4

dubai: 3

melbourne: 3

about: 3

average: 3

period: 3

april: 3

celsius: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main trends in the graph but contains some inaccuracies regarding the data. For example, Paris is not the hottest city, and Dubai does not have the lowest temperature. To improve, ensure data accuracy and avoid generalizations. Also, the report could benefit from a more structured approach, such as grouping cities with similar trends together.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and identifies some trends, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The 'Overall' paragraph is not entirely accurate, as Paris is not the hottest city. The report could benefit from clearer transitions between paragraphs and a more logical flow of information. For example, grouping cities with similar temperature trends together could enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary suitable for the task. Terms like 'depicts,' 'gradually,' and 'drastic changes' are used appropriately. However, there's room to incorporate more precise and varied language to describe the temperature changes and comparisons between the cities. For instance, instead of 'rise of more than 10 degrees,' more specific terms like 'increased by 12 degrees' could be used for better accuracy. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with very few errors. The sentence structures are generally well-formed and accurate. A consistent level of grammatical accuracy is maintained throughout the report. Minor improvements could focus on varying sentence structures for enhanced readability.

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Band 7+: Look at the title and the graph about average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Melbourne. Write four introductory sentences about the graph using introductory verbs from the box on page 186. Try to use different sentence structures and vocabulary in each sentence.

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