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Band 4+: Summarize the information by selecting main features and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart showcasing five industries and their percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009, 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Five industries include Finance, Food processing, Manufacturing, Tourism, and Oil, coal, and gas. The data is as follows: Finance: 2009 - 25%, 2019 - 35%, 2029 - 40%; Food processing: 2009 - 30%, 2019 - 20%, 2029 - 15%; Manufacturing: 2009 - 35%, 2019 - 30%, 2029 - 25%; Tourism: 2009 - 15%, 2019 - 20%, 2029 - 25%; Oil, coal, and gas: 2009 - 20%, 2019 - 25%, 2029 - 30%.

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The graph shows the information of shares in five different industries during 2009,2019 and 2029.

Overall what stand out from the graph is that share of fiance in economy is the highest while the share in food processing is the lowest in all years.Another interesting point is that the shared in finance keep increasing while the share in manufacturing keep decreasing.

Looking at the details, as regrads the share in fiance is slightly over 30% in 2009 and sharply increased to 37% in 2009 and then over 40% in coming 2029.The f5%ood processing share start from 10% in 2009 and increasd to 21% and then dropped to 10% again in 2029.On the other hand, oil, coal and gas has the similar trend.

By construct,the share in manufacturing keep falling but the share in tourism starts around 25% and went down to 20% and remaing stable in the following years.

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Task Response

The report attempts to summarize the information but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overview identifies some general trends, but the subsequent details are flawed, with incorrect figures and comparisons. The structure is present, but the content is unreliable. To improve, focus on accurately extracting and reporting the data, and ensure that comparisons are based on correct information. Proofread carefully to avoid numerical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and inaccuracies. Paragraphing could be improved to better group related ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inaccurate word choice. Expand your vocabulary and focus on using more precise language to describe trends and data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Proofread carefully and focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules.

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