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The image displays a table with percentage data for four entities over six years. For the year 2012, the values are: Japan 40%, South Korea 50%, USA 60%, and UK 55%. For 2014: Japan 45%, South Korea 55%, USA 65%, and UK 60%. For 2016: Japan 50%, South Korea 65%, USA 70%, and UK 68%. For 2018: Japan 55%, South Korea 70%, USA 75%, and UK 72%. For 2020: Japan 60%, South Korea 78%, USA 80%, and UK 78%. For 2022: Japan 65%, South Korea 85%, USA 85%, and UK 82%.

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Table below shows the percentage of people using smartphone in four countries USA, Japan, South Korea and UK from 2012 to 2022. Graphs shows the usage of smartphone every two years.

In 2012 Japan shows 40% then grows to 5% in every two years until 2022, in 2022 graph shows 65%. South Korea had 50% in 2012, in 2014 it was 55%, but then it growed to 10% after that growed to 5%. In 2018 to 2022 the percentage growed to 85%. USA percentages been growing to 5% every two year, but in 2020 to 2022 it rosed to 15%. UK graphs shows rose of 5% in first two years then rosed to 68%, then in six years it rosed to 82%.

Overall the table rosed constantly in every two years. USA and South Korea has the highest percentage of usage about 85% while the Japan has the smallest percentage of smartphone usage approximately 65% and UK has about 82%

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shows: 5

percentage: 4

every: 4

years: 4

rosed: 4

smartphone: 3

japan: 3

south: 3

korea: 3

usage: 3

growed: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with accuracy and clarity. The description of the data contains some inaccuracies and could be more precise. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and using clearer language to describe trends and comparisons.

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The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The information is not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons between countries. The overview is very general and doesn't provide a clear summary of the main trends. Consider grouping countries with similar trends together and using more specific language to describe the overall patterns.

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The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There is limited use of more sophisticated language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'grows' or 'rosed,' try using synonyms like 'increased,' 'climbed,' 'expanded,' or 'surged.' Also, incorporate more precise language to describe the rates of change (e.g., 'a steady increase,' 'a significant jump'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('growed' instead of 'grew'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is also quite simple and repetitive. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and varied sentence beginnings, to improve the flow and clarity of your writing. Proofread carefully to eliminate grammatical errors.

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