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Band 4+: The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for the retail sectors in Australia in 2013 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two pie charts comparing online sales for retail sectors in Australia between 2013 and 2018. In 2013: Electronics & Appliances (35%), Food & Beverage (22%), Home Furnishings (25%), Video Games (18%). In 2018: Electronics & Appliances (30%), Food & Beverage (32%), Home Furnishings (23%), Video Games (15%).
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The two pie charts compare the percentage of online shopping sales in Australia for different retail sectors(electronic and appliances, food and beverage, home furnishings and video games) in the years 2013 and 2018.

Overall at the chart between untill the last version of the informations, theres four different retail sectors. While two of the sectors are increased(video games, food& beverage) by the time the other two of them are decreased. (electronics& appliances and home furnishing)

The charts shows us in 2013 to 2018 video games and food&beverage percentages goes up from to and to respectively.

The other retail sectors(home furnishing and electronics&appliances) are dramatically goes down. In 2013 home furnishing is and at the time of 2018 its . For electronics&appliances its only %5 percentage of downward between 2013 and 2018.

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

5
The report identifies the main categories and notes some changes over time, but the description lacks precision and clarity. There are noticeable grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect the overall coherence. To improve, focus on using more precise language to describe the data, ensure accurate reporting of the percentages, and proofread carefully for grammatical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The report struggles with coherence and cohesion. The overall structure is present, but the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. Focus on using clear transitions and organizing information logically to improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of varied vocabulary to describe the trends and comparisons. Incorporate more specific and descriptive words related to sales and trends to enhance the report's lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impede understanding. Concentrate on improving basic grammar and sentence structure to enhance accuracy.

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