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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: • explain why you have moved • describe your new apartment • invite him/her to pay a visit

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Dear Xadicha

How have you

been i am doing good recently i have moved a new apartment in the same area

The reason

why i moved old apartment first of all rooms are uncomfortable and small again

being some water proble

My new apartment is better. It is a large, living room and two bedrooms with washrooms one dining room and there is also a balcony. A beautiful view can be seen from the balcony and I like that all rooms fully furnished.

On the other hand there are playground and swimming pool in the residential area for children. Again ground floor is located area supermarket there bakery, grociers, dairy product and cakes. I hope you will visit me in my new apartment. So I invite you come at the weekend. I will be waiting for you sweety.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

apartment: 4

there: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The reasons for moving, description of the new apartment, and invitation are all present. However, the organization could be improved for better clarity and flow. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's coherence is somewhat disrupted by grammatical errors and the abrupt transitions between ideas. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance the flow and readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and precision. More varied and descriptive language would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Focusing on grammar and sentence structure is crucial for improvement.

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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: • explain why you have moved • describe your new apartment • invite him/her to pay a visit

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