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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: • explain why you have moved • describe your new apartment • invite him/her to pay a visit

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Dear John,

Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. The reason why I’m writing this letter is that I want to tell you about my new apartment that I’ve recently moved.

At first, I need to tell you about why I moved this flat. I just necessary the enermous house and want to find out some good ones which is suitable for me. To put it another way, I had abandoned from my home because of some family issues. I don’t care now.

Let’s talk about the features and good things which is in my home. There are so many different tools and products to use. I’m so glad that there has a lot of foods and meals.

Now, I’m going to invite my new apartment and we’re find some good day for us, especially we’re dance and karaoke together at night. So come to my home!

Best regards,

Ulugbek

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the move and description of the apartment could be more detailed and clearer.

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The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The connection between paragraphs is sometimes unclear.

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The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter.

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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: • explain why you have moved • describe your new apartment • invite him/her to pay a visit

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