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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: • explain why you have moved • describe your new apartment • invite him/her to pay a visit

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Hi Tom,

How are you,It has been while we meet together,I have a great news for you.I have moved to new apartment in the middle of Green street behind the school.

The reason I left my old house is that the new ones are more comfortable to live and cozy,Furthermore,This new flat cheaper and near all facilities.However,this flat situated further the my work,it is garden doesnt worried me,Because,I can spend time there and cook some barbecues and other meals in my garden.

My new apartment is much bigger than previous one and it included large kitchen,two bedrooms,living room and one bathroom.Morever,I can see the breathtaking view of outdoors with my balcony.

Lastly,I want to invite you this new accomodition.We drink some drinks and play some games on computer and interact with each other a lot of time and spend quality time together.Next week on Sunday.I cant wait to hear answer from you

Your friend

Teshavoy

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The reasons for moving, description of the new apartment, and invitation are all present. However, some aspects could be more clearly explained and developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow are inconsistent. The numerous grammatical errors disrupt the overall coherence and make the message difficult to follow at times. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would add impact and demonstrate a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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