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Band 7+: Some people think that childern should learn how to compete, but others think that childern should be taught to coperate to become more useful adults. Express some reasons for both views and give your own opinions.

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On the one hand, competition can encourage children to work harder and achieve higher goals. When children compete in school or sports, they often try to improve, develop discipline, and feel proud of their successes. For example, academic contests or team games can teach perseverance and resilience, which are useful in adult life. A competitive attitude can also prepare children for the realities of the working world, where individuals often need to stand out to succeed.

On the other hand, cooperation helps children develop important social and emotional skills. By sharing ideas, solving problems together, and respecting others, they become better team players. These skills are highly valued in today’s workplaces, where teamwork and communication are essential. Cooperative activities also reduce stress and rivalry, allowing children to focus on learning together. For example, group projects at school teach empathy and leadership, helping children grow into considerate and collaborative adults.

In my view, while some competition can be useful, cooperation should be encouraged more strongly. It helps children develop emotional intelligence, build good relationships, and succeed in a world where working together is often more important than winning alone.

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