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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image comprises a graph labeled "Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic 38" with the X-axis marked "Time" from "6:00" to "22:00" at 2-hour intervals, and the Y-axis labeled "Number of People" ranging from 0 to 500 at 100-unit intervals. The line graph displays data points at each time interval with associated values: 6:00 (100), 8:00 (400), 10:00 (300), 12:00 (100), 14:00 (400), 16:00 (200), 18:00 (500), 20:00 (100), 22:00 (300). The points are connected to form a zigzag pattern with peaks at 8:00, 14:00, and 18:00, and troughs at 6:00, 12:00, 16:00, and 20:00.

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The line graph illustrates number of passengers using Paris Metro station changes at different times a typical day.

Overall, the passengers are increase during the rush hours before and after work. Which are the busiest times of the day,in addition there are large numbers of passengers.

At 6 .00 a.m around 100 passenger use metro. After sunrice,many people start to travel work and passenger choose a fast means of transport such as the metro like 8.00 p,m the metro becomes very crowded. However this situation lasts only for a short time.

Between 12 p.m and 14.00 p.m number of people remains constant. The number began to increase after 5 p.m. 20.00 p.m around 100 passenger use metro it’s not very high difference comparicion 21.00 p.m because slightly higher than at other times in the evening.At midnight 22.00 p.m users metro will constantly.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

metro: 6

number: 3

times: 3

after: 3

passenger: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is present but could be improved. The language contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affects clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data representation, clearer organization with distinct paragraphs, and more precise language use. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a cohesive manner, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is weak, and the transitions between sentences and ideas are abrupt. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the graph, and a conclusion. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of synonyms or more sophisticated language to describe the trends and data in the graph. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., peak, decline, fluctuate), quantities (e.g., substantial, minimal, consistent), and time (e.g., throughout the day, during peak hours). Focus on using more precise language to describe the data and avoid repetition of simple words. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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