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Band 6+: You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Hello Michael

How’s it going?

I hope you’re feeling is better. I was so sad that I couldn’t play soccer with you, but the happiest thing is that you’re fortunately still alive.

Actually 12 people gathered in total, so we decided to split up in 6people. We had 3 match and my team actually won! We lost I match though. But I’m sure we could win all games if you were there in my team. Everyone knows you’re the best soccer player. We wanted to play one more match, but it suddenly stareed raining, so we ended up going back earlier than we had planned. During the march, I again realized how fun soccer was. We used to play it when we were kids, and we still do it, which is insane. I definitely want to play soccer with you no matter how we grow up.

Anyway, I’ll come visit you soon! Get well soon!

Yuri

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

soccer: 4

you're: 3

match: 3

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements could be made to the structure and clarity of information.

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The letter is generally easy to follow, but some sentences lack a smooth flow. Improving sentence structure and transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate, showing a good range. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to enhance the overall effect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, there are some errors that affect the overall clarity and flow. Improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the score.

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