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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the different types of electronic devices used by people in Australia in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart showing the percentage of different age groups using four types of devices: smartphone, tablet, laptop, and e-reader. 12-24-year-olds: smartphone (~90%), tablet (~35%), laptop (~80%), e-reader (~20%); 25-50-year-olds: smartphone (~85%), tablet (~50%), laptop (~75%), e-reader (~30%); 51-75-year-olds: smartphone (~60%), tablet (~40%), laptop (~65%), e-reader (~25%); 76 years+: smartphone (~30%), tablet (~20%), laptop (~35%), e-reader (~10%). The y-axis indicates percentage from 0 to 100%, and the x-axis lists the devices. Each device has four bars corresponding to the four age groups.

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The bar chart depicts the 4 different types of electronic devices used by Australian people in year 2000. Overall Smartphone was most popular among teenagers,whereas e-reader had almost no user.In contrast e-reader was popular amongst the most oldest age group.

The smartphone user percentage decreases as the age group gets older. adolescents: 65%; Middleage: 40%; 51-75: 30%; 76+ age group which is the oldest, had the least: 5% respectively.25-50 year olds was seen dominating in popularity on tablet devices,However tablet was unfavoured by older age groups as only 4% of 76+ year olds used it.

Laptop and e-reader devices were tend to be used by old folks.Almost 70% of people using laptop was by 51+ age people,remaining small percent was filled by teen and middleage people.E-reader was used solely by 76+ year olds with little over 60% the rest was by the other 3 age groups

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The organization is present but lacks coherence, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing information logically, and using precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different aspects of the data. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific device or age group, and a concluding summary. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of synonyms or more sophisticated language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'popular,' try 'prevalent,' 'favored,' or 'widely used.' To enhance lexical resource, expand your vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data analysis. Use a thesaurus to find alternative words and phrases. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede clarity and understanding. For instance, the sentence 'E-reader was popular amongst the most oldest age group' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct mistakes.

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