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Band 5+: The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in future to reduce the number of accidents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two diagrams comparing a current road system and a proposed future road system, both with traffic lights and arrow indicators. The existing system features five "House" icons spread near junctions, frequent accidents marked by four red exclamation marks centralized around a crossroads near the school, and supermarket. In the proposed future system, a single roundabout occupies the main junction with redistributed traffic lights, the same five "House" icons unchanged, and no frequent accident locations indicated. The school, supermarket, and city road labels remain consistent in both diagrams.

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The map illustrat es the design of road system at the present and the future design of road system.

Overall, some of constructions at the road look similar, such as the school, supermarket, and the residential. But, there will be a transformation for the future construction.

At the present, the design of the road system has a several parts, such as city road in the west, the low lane road, forest road at the middle, and city road in the east. Additionally, there is a frequent accident in several part of the road. But there will be a transformation for the future construction.

On the other hand, after development design, there will be a transformation of the design, such as the frequent accident will be transform to traffic light. City road in the west will be change the shape of the road and will be parallel to the eastersn side of the city road. Last, the road of the supermarket will be reshaping.

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Task Response

The report identifies some key features of the maps but lacks specific details and accurate comparisons. The description of the current and proposed road systems is quite general, and there are inaccuracies in describing the changes. To improve, provide more specific details about the road layouts, the exact changes proposed (e.g., the roundabout), and the impact on traffic flow. Use more precise language and avoid vague terms like 'transformation' without explaining what is being transformed into what. Also, ensure accurate reporting of the locations and changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. The repetition of phrases like "there will be a transformation" does not contribute to the flow. To improve coherence, use varied transitional phrases and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the map comparison. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There is reliance on general words like "transformation" and "construction." To enhance lexical resource, incorporate more specific vocabulary related to road systems and map descriptions, such as "roundabout," "junction," "realigned," or "infrastructure." Use synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ("illustrat es"), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are relatively simple, limiting the demonstration of grammatical range. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences) and carefully proofread for grammatical errors. Pay attention to correct article usage and preposition choices.

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