🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 8+: You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student who eats at the college cafeteria every lunchtime. First of all, I really like the cafeteria because the food is affordable and the staff are friendly. The dining area is also large and convenient for students. However, there are some problems. The menu is not very varied, and sometimes the food is not hot enough. In addition, the cafeteria is often too crowded at noon. I suggest adding more dishes, especially healthy food, and improving the serving speed. More fans or air conditioners would also make the room more comfortable.

Thank you for considering my suggestions.

Yours faithfully,

Anna

Word Count: 105

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cafeteria: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It clearly explains what the writer likes about the cafeteria, details the problems, and suggests improvements. The content is relevant and well-organized. Occasional omissions or lapses are acceptable at this level, and none are apparent here. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is effective, and the use of cohesive devices makes the letter flow smoothly.

Lexical Resource

A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Punctuation and grammar are used appropriately throughout.

Answers On The Same Topic:

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Mrs. Lao, I hope this letter finds you well. I am a customer visiting your food corner regularly in the college cafeteria during lunch time. I would like to express my delight and appreciation and drinks that you serve. Your meals are scrumptious and healthy, making me reminisce my mother’s home-cooked meals back at […]

Band 6+

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to bring you attention regarding unhygienic food, which is being given to people by the hospital ‘s cafeteria. As we work in the tertiary care hospital, therefore; it is important to give fresh dishes to the people visit the canteen in order to avoid getting any diseases. There […]

Band 4+

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

Hello Martin, I am writing to request you to improve the meals from college cafeteria. As you know, everyday at college cafeteria have a lunch lots of students. However, for the last semester there were a lot of unhealthy food, like fast foods. Now, I want to give some ideas to improve meals from canteen […]

Band 5+

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to explain both advantages and disadvantages about college cafeteria similarly, suggest about some alternatives to remove them. On the one hand, our lunch counter has a lot of positives like unusual dessert which are very tasty and large area to […]

Band 5+

See All

Band 8+: You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir or Madam,

Other Topics:

You recently bought a piece of furniture (a dining table) from an online store. When it arrived, you found that it was damaged. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: explain what you bought and when it arrived; describe the damage; say what you want them to do about it.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium