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Band 5+: the chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 - 2010.

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The image depicts foreign aid in billion dollars from USA, UK, Germany, Japan, Netherlands, Sweden to developing countries in 2008-2010: USA: 2008 - 22, 2009 - 18, 2010 - 28; UK: 2008 - 10, 2009 - 8, 2010 - 11; Germany: 2008 - 10, 2009 - 12, 2010 - 10; Japan: 2008 - 9, 2009 - 10, 2010 - 11; Netherlands: 2008 - 7, 2009 - 7, 2010 - 6; Sweden: 2008 - 7, 2009 - 7, 2010 - 5.

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The bar chart below depicts the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010.

Overall, It is very obvious that USAremained the highest aid distributor after the continous rise after it fall in the year before, Sweden remained the lowest while UK and germany made a significant increase in foreign aids distribution over the years.

However, in 2008 the foreign aid from the USA made an increase but later decreased in 2009 the following year but later made a significant rise in 2010, on the other hand, the UK foreign aid to the developing countries decreasesd but increased graduallly in 2009 and 2010.

Netherlands remained the lowest in 2008, while sweden remained the most decreased aid distributor to the developing countries in 2010, whereas germany had its significant rise in the year 2010 and followed by japan in the same year after japan had a drop at 5.8% in 2009

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data to support the claims. The writing could be more organized and coherent. To improve, focus on providing precise data, structuring the report with a clear overview and specific details, and ensuring accurate comparisons between countries and years.

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The report's organization could be improved. The overview is present but lacks specific details, and the subsequent paragraphs jump between different countries without a clear structure. Consider grouping countries with similar trends together or dedicating a paragraph to each country for better flow. The use of cohesive devices is present but could be more effective in guiding the reader through the information.

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The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'increase' and 'decrease,' try incorporating synonyms like 'rise,' 'growth,' 'decline,' or 'reduction.' Also, be careful with word choice to ensure accuracy (e.g., 'aid distributor').

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. Sentence structure could also be varied to improve readability. Proofreading carefully before submission can help identify and correct these errors.

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