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Band 5+: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates household ownership and renting percentages in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011: 1918–23% owned, 77% rented; 1939–32% owned, 68% rented; 1953–32% owned, 68% rented; 1961–43% owned, 57% rented; 1971–50% owned, 50% rented; 1981–60% owned, 40% rented; 1991–69% owned, 31% rented; 2001–69% owned, 31% rented; 2011–64% owned, 36% rented.

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The bar chart depicts the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011. The ash and dark shading in the bar chart represent owned and rented space respectively.

Overall, house in rented accommodation had the highest proportion of 78% in 1918 with the least been in 2001. Household owned in 2001 had the highest proportion with the least in 1918.

To begin, Rented accommodation started with a high proportion then gradually fluctuated. However owned household steadily increased through out.

Additionally, in 1981 both rented and owned households had the same proportion of 50%. In 1981 and 2001 households in rented accommodation had almost similar proportion of 68% and 69% respectively on the bar chart.

In contrast, rented space had a proportion of 78% while owned household had a proportion of 22% in 1981, in 2011 owned household had a proportion of 63% while rented accommodation had a proportion of 45%.

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proportion: 9

rented: 8

owned: 7

accommodation: 5

household: 4

households: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides some relevant information, but there are inaccuracies and a lack of clear structure. The organization could be improved by grouping information more logically and using clearer transitions. The report also contains some inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information into clear paragraphs with specific themes, and using precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow of ideas is not always logical. The use of cohesive devices is present but not consistently effective, leading to some choppiness. Paragraphing could be improved to group related ideas more clearly. For example, the comparison of proportions in different years feels somewhat disjointed. Try to create a clearer narrative by grouping similar trends or periods together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While words like 'proportion' and 'fluctuated' are used, consider incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific terms to describe the trends. For instance, instead of 'gradually fluctuated,' you could use 'steadily declined' or 'experienced a period of volatility.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('house in rented accommodation had'), incorrect tense usage, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there's limited use of complex sentence structures. To improve, focus on proofreading carefully for common errors and practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more precisely.

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