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Band 4+: Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give reasons and examples from your own experience. Write 250 words minimum.

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These days many people spend most of time in a workplace in order to get better life condition, earn money and climb the career ladder, whereas they do not gather with famil, lose the sense of community and face health problems. This phenomenon has both pros and cons which affect on people’s life.

On the one hand, in todays capitalistic and competitive world individuals have to work more than they should, due to the fact that, there are a big number of competitors who want well-paid job in a job market , so many employers demand hard working, rich background and dedication to the work. Moreover, everyone wants the best life condition, education and medicine for their family. To reach these goals employees hard work, take various projects and business trips, that contribute to both personal and career development. Women who work without maternity leave, for example, reach the high position at the work faster than those who have a large family.

On the other hand, working a lot cause different issues. Firstly, by spending time on workplace, people forget about family and home. Hence, family members lose contact between each others, do not interested in difficulties of cloth people and family traditions are disappeared step by step. Furthermore, working over time without recovering and resting have negative effects on physical and mental well-being, espetially where people sit for whole day at one place. As a consequance, these employees have health problems such as poor eye sight and back. If individuals continue work in harsh conditions they will lose heath as well as ability to work better and improve their skills. For instance, in many countries people who work in a sedentary work face obesity and as a result lose a capability to work.

To conclude, people should keep work-life balance in order to escape problems in private life, health and mental well-being.

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