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Band 5+: The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two pie charts. The left chart titled "Total World Energy Consumption" includes the following data: Oil 33.6%, Coal 27.2%, Gas 23.1%, Hydro 6.8%, Nuclear 4.8%, Combustible Renewables & Waste 3.9%, Other 0.6%. The right chart titled "Total World Electricity Generation" includes: Coal 38.4%, Gas 23.2%, Hydro 16.4%, Nuclear 10.4%, Oil 6.7%, Other 2.1%, Combustible Renewables & Waste 2.7%.

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The pie charts illustrate total world energy consumption and electricity generation for previous year.

Overall, oil and coal were the dominent source of total energy consumption and electricity generation respectively.By contrast, Hydro and oil accompained by other sources had minor contribution in world’s total energy consumption and electricity generation respectively.

Firstly,oil was the main source of energy consumption which includs 34.3% followed by coal which is 25.1% while, coal was the major source of electricity generation which constitute 39.8% accompained by gas which is 19.6%. Furthermore, gas contributed 20.9% into energy consumption.Hydro 2.2% ,nuclear 6.5% and combustion renewables & waste 10.6% had minor contribution in energy consumption .By contrast, oil 6.7% , nuclear 15.7% and hydro 16.1% had statisfied amount of contribution in electricity generation.

In addition, other resouces which includes 0.4% and 2.1 had small involment in total world energy consumption and electricity generation respectively.

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energy: 7

consumption: 6

electricity: 6

generation: 5

which: 5

total: 4

source: 3

contribution: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies key trends, such as the dominance of oil and coal. However, the response is somewhat repetitive in its structure, and the grouping of data could be more logical to improve the flow of comparisons. While the task asks for comparisons, the report often lists data points sequentially rather than highlighting the relationships between consumption and generation (for example, noting that coal's share is significantly higher in electricity generation than in total energy consumption). Additionally, ensure that all data points are presented clearly to avoid confusion in the reader's understanding of which percentage belongs to which category. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is weakened by repetitive sentence structures and improper use of transition signals. For example, the use of 'respectively' is frequent but sometimes applied in a way that makes the sentence difficult to follow. To improve, try to vary your linking words and ensure that the relationship between different data points is expressed through more sophisticated cohesive devices rather than just listing facts.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'dominent', 'accompained', 'includs', 'statisfied', 'resouces', 'involment'). There is also some awkward phrasing, such as 'had satisfied amount of contribution', which is not natural in an academic context. Aim to use a wider range of academic synonyms for 'show' (e.g., depict, represent) and 'small' (e.g., negligible, marginal) to enhance the precision and sophistication of your report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical accuracy is a significant issue in this report. There are frequent errors in subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'oil and coal were the dominent source' should be 'sources'), article usage, and punctuation. The sentence structures are often repetitive and lack the complexity required for higher bands. Focus on mastering basic sentence construction, particularly the correct use of relative clauses and ensuring that verb tenses are consistent throughout the report.

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