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Cause And Solution

Band 5+: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Write at least 250 words

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Numerous university students these days are experiencing work and study at the same time. I do believe that the reasons of this are the miserable financial situation that most of students are living in, and the accumulation of diffrent responsabilites on them. Also, to overcome this paradox i suggest to learners to find suituble jobs to combine between studies and work, and goverments have to provide more scholarships for these students.

Firstly, the main reason that push learners to work while studying is their awful financial situation, because most of them have become recently adult they don’t really know how to manage their uses of money. In addition, most of them at this age are confronting the stand of diffrent responsabilites .So, thechenically they find themselves always under pressure and stress.For instance, The American society reports has shown recently that 80% of university students are working while studying which made them become depressed and getting a lot of psychological issues

To overcome this propaganda. Officials have to look for these poor students and take this case seriously by studying it and provide for them scholarships, so they can focus more with their studies and become in a better mentsl health. For example, in the country of italy scholarships are not only for elite students, it also for broken ones, that’s why most of them are living in hapiness, peace, and passing their educational semestre succesfully. In addition, learners have to manage their situation and deal with their responsability wisely by finding job-student that helps them to combine between university and making money. For enstance, they can work in shifts at their free time or on the summer and keep their funds for winter while studying.

In conclusion, this essay has dived into the real reasons of lack time for education and constantly feeling under pressure for working students, and has suggested logical solutions for this.

Word Count: 315

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