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The image shows a line graph comparing percentages of different age groups from 1990 to 2010: in 1990, 18-24 at ~5%, 25-34 at ~5%, 35-44 at ~3%, 45+ at ~1%; in 1994, 18-24 at ~8%, 25-34 at ~8%, 35-44 at ~3%, 45+ at ~1%; in 1998, 18-24 at ~16%, 25-34 at ~18%, 35-44 at ~5%, 45+ at ~2%; in 2002, 18-24 at ~24%, 25-34 at ~30%, 35-44 at ~6%, 45+ at ~3%; in 2006, 18-24 at ~40%, 25-34 at ~48%, 35-44 at ~9%, 45+ at ~5%; in 2010, 18-24 at ~35%, 25-34 at ~45%, 35-44 at ~10%, 45+ at ~7%.

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First of all this graph illustrates that of numerous age group people are going to gym in every month from 1990 to 2010. These data measured in percentage.

Overall it is clear that people from the age of 25 to 34 get the highest trend from 1990 to till 2010 while human from the age 18 to 24 also have the greater percentage till 2010. Whereas the older people who are 45 plus get the lowest trend from 1990 to 2010.

In 1990, people who are 25 to 34 have 8 percent the sharply increased in 1996 and eventually in 2005 these people get 50 percentage and then gradually drop in 2008. People who are 18 to 24 have up and downward trend but it increased through the time In 1990 it had 12 percent but afterward this trend increased till 2004 and then become steady.

The people who age group fall in 35 to 44 slowly increased. In 1990 it had 4 percent after that this trend slowly increased till 2006 and then sharply increased in 2010. Those who are 45 plus had less percent in this trend and had an uneven trend till 2002 afterward these people got interested in gym and rise in this trend

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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people: 8

trend: 8

increased: 6

percent: 4

these: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides an overview, which is positive. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. The report includes specific years and percentages (e.g., 1996, 2005, 2008, 2004, 2008) that do not align with the data provided in the visual description. Additionally, the phrasing is often unclear, making it difficult to follow the specific movements of the data. To improve, ensure that all cited figures and years strictly match the provided information and focus on using more precise academic vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', or 'remained stable') rather than repetitive phrases like 'this trend'.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor phrasing. While you have attempted to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'In 1990', 'afterward'), they are often used incorrectly or in a way that feels repetitive. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Avoid starting sentences with 'First of all' in a Task 1 report, as this is more suited to an opinion essay; instead, use an introductory sentence that paraphrases the prompt.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often inaccurate. There is a repetitive use of the word 'trend' to describe actual data points (e.g., 'get the highest trend' or 'had less percent in this trend'), which is semantically incorrect. You should use 'trend' to describe a general direction of change, but use words like 'percentage', 'proportion', or 'figure' when referring to the data itself. Additionally, terms like 'human' are inappropriate in this context; 'individuals' or 'people' is much more natural. Work on learning collocations related to data description, such as 'showed a significant increase' or 'reached a peak'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and often impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'the sharply increased' instead of 'sharply increased'). Many sentences are fragmented or poorly constructed, such as 'The people who age group fall in 35 to 44 slowly increased'. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using relative clauses (e.g., 'The percentage of people aged 25-34, which was 8% in 1990, rose significantly...') and ensure that your verb tenses are consistent with the time period being described (the past tense should be used for historical data).

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