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Band 4+: The chart below shows information about European people of different age groups who went to the gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010.

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The image shows a line graph from 1990 to 2010 detailing European gym attendance among various age groups monthly or more: 18-24 started at 10%, rising to 58% by 2010; 25-34 began at 5%, reaching 45%; 35-44 started at 2%, ending at 32%; 45 and over started at 1%, peaking at 28% in 2010. Points marked: 1994 shows 18-24 at 18%, 25-34 at 10%, 35-44 at 6%, 45 and over at 4%; 1998 shows 18-24 at 28%, 25-34 at 15%, 35-44 at 11%, 45 and over at 9%; 2002 shows 18-24 at 40%, 25-34 at 22%, 35-44 at 17%, 45 and over at 15%; 2006 shows 18-24 at 48%, 25-34 at 34%, 35-44 at 25%, 45 and over at 22%.

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The line graph depicts the data about European citizens of variety type of age groups who went to the gym once a month or more from 1990 and 2010.

Overall, majority of people 25-34 went to the gym and procents increased during a period, while people 18-24,also went to the gym more, and they become higher percent than people 25-34.Even though, people who 35-44 and 45 and over age were the minority to going to the gym.

Begin with 1990, people 25-34 accounted from 10 percent, who went to the gym and percentage increased moderately, and was 30 percent in 1998, and people from 18-24 also percentage grew at 30 percent,while humans 35-44, who went to the gym were 5 percent approximately, and rose fourfold until 1998.People from 45 and over also were 5 percent, and increased slightly by 5 percent between 1990 and 1998

From 2002 to 2010, people 25-34,who went to the gym boosted by 20 percent, whilst people 18-24 percentage reached a peak at 60 percent, and decreased considerably by 10 percent,but at the end the percentage was 60.People 35-44 were 20 percent,and significant escalated at 40 percent in 2010, however people 45 and over,who went to the gym held steady at 10 percent in 2006, and increased by 10 percent in 2010.

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people: 9

increased: 4

percentage: 4

35-44: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and attempts to describe the trends for all age groups. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some reported figures contradict the visual description (for example, stating the 18-24 group reached 60% and then decreased, while the description shows a steady rise). Additionally, the overview is somewhat confusingly worded, and the use of terms like 'humans' is inappropriate for an academic report. To improve, focus on ensuring that the data cited matches the graph accurately and work on using more precise mathematical language (e.g., 'increased to' instead of 'boosted by' when referring to a final value). Improving grammatical structures and sentence cohesion will also help in presenting a clearer comparison between the groups.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, following a chronological order, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor sentence structure. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate (e.g., starting sentences with 'Even though' in a way that creates fragments). To improve, focus on using transition words like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Subsequently' to link ideas smoothly, and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and often used incorrectly, which makes the report difficult to follow. There are several instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'variety type of age groups,' 'humans 35-44,' and 'significant escalated.' You should aim to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'climbed steadily,' 'surpassed,' 'remained the lowest') and avoid using 'humans' when referring to demographic groups; 'individuals' or 'people' is more appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'accounted from' instead of 'accounted for'), and sentence fragments. Many sentences are run-on sentences that combine too many ideas without proper punctuation. I recommend practicing complex sentence structures and focusing on the correct use of relative clauses (e.g., 'the percentage of people who...') to improve accuracy.

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