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Band 5+: The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two pie charts. The left chart titled "Total World Energy Consumption" includes the following data: Oil 33.6%, Coal 27.2%, Gas 23.1%, Hydro 6.8%, Nuclear 4.8%, Combustible Renewables & Waste 3.9%, Other 0.6%. The right chart titled "Total World Electricity Generation" includes: Coal 38.4%, Gas 23.2%, Hydro 16.4%, Nuclear 10.4%, Oil 6.7%, Other 2.1%, Combustible Renewables & Waste 2.7%.

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Both pie charts illustrate the energy usage and the electricity generated by energy resources globally in previous year.

Overall. oil accounted for the highest proportion in total world energy consumption, whereas coal costituted the highest percentage in total world electricity generation. Gas represented same shares in both charts, however, other resources accounted for the least proportion.

In total world energy consumption, oil accounted for 34.3%, which was the highest proportion, coal represented the highest percentage to generate electricity, accounting for 39.8%, while other constitted the least percentage in both pie charts, accounting for 0.4 and 2.1 respectively. Gas made up approximately 20% in both charts.

However, coal made up a quarter of energy use in total, while hydro represented a moderate share in electricity, 16.1%. Combustible renewables and waste made one tenth share of energy consumption.

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energy: 6

electricity: 4

highest: 4

total: 4

charts: 3

accounted: 3

world: 3

consumption: 3

percentage: 3

represented: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies the primary trends, such as the dominance of oil in consumption and coal in electricity generation. However, the response is somewhat inconsistent in its data reporting and organization. There is a tendency to mix data from both charts within the same sentences, which can make the comparison less clear. Additionally, some mathematical descriptions are slightly inaccurate (e.g., stating renewables made up 'one tenth' of energy consumption when the data suggests a much smaller figure). To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus - either on specific categories or on a clear comparison between the two charts - and double-check that all numerical approximations are logically sound. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is weakened by several issues. The transition between sentences is sometimes abrupt, and the use of punctuation (such as the period after 'Overall') is incorrect, which disrupts the flow. To improve, ensure that cohesive devices (like 'In contrast', 'Furthermore', or 'Regarding...') are used to link ideas smoothly, and pay close attention to sentence boundaries to avoid fragments.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but repetitive. Words like 'accounted for', 'represented', and 'highest proportion' are used multiple times without much variation. There are also spelling errors (e.g., 'costituted', 'constitted') that detract from the professional quality of the report. To reach a higher band, try to use a wider range of synonyms for 'show' (e.g., 'depict', 'illustrate', 'display') and 'proportion' (e.g., 'percentage', 'share', 'fraction'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent errors in grammar and punctuation. For example, the use of 'Overall.' as a standalone sentence is a fragment, and the phrasing 'represented same shares' is missing the article 'the'. Additionally, some sentences are overly long and run-on, making them difficult to follow. Focus on mastering subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles (a, an, the) to improve accuracy.

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