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Band 7+: You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to apply for a part-time job in your restaurant. I have recently moved to this city and I am currently looking for this opporunitie to support my studies. I am particularly interested in working in a waiter role with a proffessional and friendly environment such as yours.

In terms of my previous job, I have worked for two years as a waiter in a busy cafe, where I was responsible for taking orders, serving food and drinks, and ensuring customer satisfaction, which helped me develop strong communication skills, the ability to work under pressure, and good understanding of customer service.

I believe I would be a suitable candidate for the job because I am hardworking, reliable, and quick to learn, I am also able to work felxible hours, including evenings and weekends. Furthermore, I enjoy working as part of a team and always aim to provide a positive experince for customers.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Godjil lamine

Word Count: 176

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7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter fully addresses all parts of the task. The purpose of writing is clearly stated, the previous work experience is described in sufficient detail, and the reasons for suitability are well-explained. The tone is appropriately formal for a job application. To further improve, ensure that minor spelling errors (e.g., 'opporunitie', 'proffessional', 'felxible', 'experince') are corrected, although these do not detract from the overall task achievement.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is very well-organized. You have addressed all three bullet points from the task clearly and logically. Each paragraph has a specific purpose, which makes the progression of ideas easy to follow. To improve, ensure that your transitions between sentences are even smoother; for example, in the third paragraph, you used a comma to join two independent clauses (a comma splice), which slightly disrupts the flow. Using a semicolon or starting a new sentence would be more effective.

Lexical Resource

You have used a good range of vocabulary appropriate for a job application, such as 'responsible for,' 'customer satisfaction,' and 'suitable candidate.' However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'opporunitie', 'proffessional', 'felxible', 'experince') that prevent a higher score. While these do not impede communication, accuracy in spelling is essential for a high band score. Aim to double-check your work for these minor typos.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Your grammatical range is good, with a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. You successfully used relative clauses (e.g., 'where I was responsible for...') to add detail. The main area for improvement is punctuation, specifically avoiding comma splices. For instance, 'I am hardworking, reliable, and quick to learn, I am also able to work...' should be two separate sentences or joined with a conjunction. Correcting these small errors will significantly increase your grammatical accuracy.

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