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Band 5+: The chart shows internet speeds in five different Australian cities in megabytes per second in 2005 and 2015. The graph shows the type of internet connections Australian people had in 2010.

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The image shows internet speeds in megabytes per second in five Australian cities in 2005 and 2015, and types of internet connections in 2010; Sydney: 2015-12 MBPS, 2005-6 MBPS; Melbourne: 2015-8 MBPS, 2005-4 MBPS; Perth: 2015-4 MBPS, 2005-2 MBPS; Adelaide: 2015-4 MBPS, 2005-3 MBPS; Brisbane: 2015-8 MBPS, 2005-5 MBPS; broadband-88.98%, dial up-1.84%, mobile-8.54%, none-0.64%.

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The accompanying bar chart delineates how fast internet connections were in five distinct cities in Australia in 2005 and 2010, measured in megabytes per second, while the provided pie chart reveals the type of internet connections used by individuals in Australia in 2010.

Overall, it is manifest that internet speeds increased in all five cities, and Sydney demonstrated the highest figure in both years compared to other Australian regions. Notably, over a half of Australians connected to the internet via BroadBans, but a significant proportion used mobile connection.

A close inspection of the data reveals that the highest proportion of megabytes per second was displayed in Sydney in both periods, with 13 MBPS and 14 MBPS, respectively, but with an increase of only 1 MBPS. With regard to other four cities, namely Melbourne, Perth, Adelaide, and Brisbane, all of them represented an increase of about 4 MBPS, over 1 MBPS, approximately 0,5 MBPS, and nearly 1 MBPS, respectively.

According to the information, the highest proportion of Australian people. with about 62,09%, connected to the web via BroadBans. In stark contrast, over a third of people used mobile connections, whereas only a small percentage of residents used either Dual up or had no connection at all with 1,49% and 0,89%, respectively.

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connections: 3

cities: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses all parts of the task and provides a clear overview of the trends. However, there is a significant issue with data accuracy regarding the specific figures provided in the visual description. The report includes several numbers (e.g., 13 MBPS, 14 MBPS, 62.09%, and 'over a third' for mobile) that do not align with the provided data. While the examiner is lenient toward visual description errors, the report's internal consistency is weakened when the reported figures deviate significantly from the source material. To improve, ensure that the data extracted from the charts is transcribed accurately and that the comparisons made between figures are mathematically sound.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, there are issues with sentence structure and punctuation that occasionally disrupt the flow. For example, the sentence starting with 'According to the information...' contains a fragment (a period used where a comma should be), which breaks the coherence. To improve, ensure that sentences are complete and that transitions between ideas are smoother. Using more varied cohesive devices would also help the report feel more integrated.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat repetitive and contains several spelling and usage errors that impact the professional tone. Specifically, 'BroadBans' and 'Dual up' are incorrect terms (should be 'broadband' and 'dial-up'). Additionally, the word 'proportion' is used incorrectly when referring to internet speed; 'speed' or 'rate' should be used for MBPS, as 'proportion' refers to percentages or parts of a whole. Aim for greater precision in word choice to distinguish between numerical values and percentages.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There is a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent. Issues include incorrect punctuation (using commas instead of decimal points, e.g., '0,5' instead of '0.5'), sentence fragments, and errors in subject-verb agreement or phrasing. The use of decimal commas is common in some languages but is considered incorrect in English academic writing, where a period must be used. Focus on mastering standard English punctuation and ensuring that complex sentences are grammatically sound.

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Band 5+: The chart shows internet speeds in five different Australian cities in megabytes per second in 2005 and 2015. The graph shows the type of internet connections Australian people had in 2010.

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