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Band 4+: Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education for the adult population who cannot read and write. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that teaching the younger people is an important for all the countries, while I certainly acknowledge the perceived risks that government shouldn’t spent more and more money for adults- who are not able to read and write-.

One primary concern stemming from adult studying more expensive but lass effective that main if government investing their cash for declining the number of mature- who are not able to read and write- it may require a lot of time and finance support but, unfortunately, it cannot be meet governments expectation. Because adults might not suitable for study, they prefer working on their handicraft instead of studying.

On the other hand, I believe that educating young people should be the government’s priority for two main reasons. First of all, young people should receive most government funding because they are the country’s future, thus a few developed countries are currently investing the largest share of their funds in educating young people; a prime example of this is Japan. After the atom boom had boomed Japan hasn’t able to grown crops in their areas, at that time Japan society realized that they cannot grow plants any more there that is the main reason why Japan government spent their money for teaching the young people rather than mature because they believe that these young individuals would be Japan’s future. This investment has paid off, and Japan has become one of the most developed countries in Asia.

In conclusion, I totally disagree about investing money for teaching mature because teaching young people not only improve their knowledge but also create the country’ s future like Japan

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