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Band 5+: The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

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The line charts illustrate the percentages of electrical appliances ownership and the data of allocated hours to do house chores in one particular country from 1920 to 2019.It is evident that, while the number of electrical appliances ownership constantly grew, the number of hours to do house chores significantly dropped at the same time

1920 face an upward trend for each and every electrical appliances escpecially for refrigerator where it started from 0, subsequently rocketed dramatically to 60 and surpassed both washing machine and vacuum cleaner in around 1940, hit its peak on the number of 100 users then stay statically until 2019. From 1920 to 1980, Vacuum Cleaner experienced a steady growth on the number 30-90 where it constantly gain 10 users every year. Between 1980 until 2000, Vacuum Cleaner reach 100 users which equivalent to Refrigerator then it stay steady until 2019. In contrary, Washing Machine saw a fluctuative numbers for its users as it rose gradually from 1920-1960 shared the number of 40-70 where it decrease to approximately 61 on 1980. Lastly on 1980 to 2019, Washing Machine experienced a steady growth from 61 to 72.

According to data, the numbers of hours for housechores fall constantly from 1920-1960 on the number 50-20. It fell subtly between 1960 until 2019 then plummeted from 20 to 10

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number: 6

users: 4

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electrical: 3

appliances: 3

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washing: 3

machine: 3

vacuum: 3

cleaner: 3

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The report addresses the task by describing the trends in appliance ownership and housework hours, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is clear, and the main trends are identified. However, the data for specific years and appliances is not always precise, and the description of the washing machine's trend is somewhat confusing. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the report is well-organized with clear paragraphs for each main feature. Additionally, avoid vague statements and make sure to include a clear conclusion or summary of the overall trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear paragraphing. The first paragraph introduces the overall trend, but the second paragraph jumps into detailed data without a clear topic sentence or cohesive link. The final paragraph is very brief and could be better integrated. Use a range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'overall') to connect ideas more smoothly. Ensure each paragraph has a clear central focus and that the report is divided into distinct sections (e.g., overview, details of each chart).

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some repetition and imprecise word choices. For example, 'constantly grew' and 'stay statically' are awkward, and 'fluctuative' is not standard. There is some attempt at using a range of verbs (e.g., 'rocketed', 'plummeted'), but the language is not consistently natural or sophisticated. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'witnessed a steady increase', 'remained stable', 'experienced a slight decline') and avoid informal or invented words. Also, ensure correct collocations (e.g., 'the number of hours' instead of 'the numbers of hours').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. There are missing articles, incorrect verb forms, and subject-verb agreement problems (e.g., 'the number of electrical appliances ownership constantly grew' should be 'the number of electrical appliances owned constantly grew'). Sentences are often run-ons or incomplete, and punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use a variety of complex and compound sentences, and proofread for basic grammar and punctuation. For example, 'In contrary' should be 'In contrast', and 'reach' should be 'reached' in past tense.

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