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Band 7+: You want to join a gym. Write a letter to a manager of the gym.

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Dear Smith,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am reaching out to ask for your support in my desire to join your gym and would be grateful for your help.

To give you some details, I really want to join your gym service because of my brother. The reason is that my brother improved his muscles and health after thirty days.

Furthermore, the most essential thing that I would like to ask is to inquire about available facilities and membership plans. Firstly, I am looking for modern gym tools like barbells, stationary bicycles, dumbbells, and so on. Additionally, I am going to enter your gym this Saturday or Sunday because I am prone to being busy from Monday to Friday.

Lastly, I want to ask you about discounts and trial periods. The reason is that I do not have much money, so I need a friendly budget price or any discounts because I am currently a student and my parents do not have enough money to pay for my gym regardless of their jobs.

Thank you in advance for considering my request. I am confident that your assistance will be invaluable and look forward to your positive response.

Yours sincerely,

John Wick.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses the task by conveying the writer's interest in joining the gym and making relevant inquiries. However, it could benefit from a more concise and direct approach.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs are logically structured, and the flow of ideas is mostly smooth. Minor improvements in transition words could enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

7

The letter demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The language is generally clear and appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter is virtually error-free, demonstrating a high level of grammatical accuracy and control. A wide range of grammatical structures is used effectively.

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