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Band 4+: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two diagrams of the Grange Park layout; the top one from 1920 with gardens on either side, a musician's stage, and a fountain; the bottom one shows the park today with an amphitheater, café, children's play area, and a water feature.

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The layouts illustrate a local park when it was initially opened in 1920 and the same park now.

Overall, the location of both the entrances remained same till now, whereas some of the rose gardens are diminished or replaced with some other stuff.

In 1920, the plans was consists of: two entrances, one from opened towards arnold avenue and another towards eldon street; one large Fountain at the center, a huge stage for the musicians, a large pond for the water plants, three rose gardens, five seating areas, and a glasshouse.

Today, the layout almost changed everything. It now includes: Two entrances, that are at the same position as were before. A huge Amphitheatre for concerts, a beautiful Water feature, a small cafe, one Children’s play area, two Rose gardens one alone, another at the center surrounded by four seats.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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gardens: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The main features of the park in 1920 and today are adequately summarized. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the comparison, such as the mention of a glasshouse in 1920 and missing details about the musician's stage and the fountain in the current layout. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information. Some sentences are overly long and complex, affecting the overall clarity.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings are present. More precise and accurate word choices could enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of grammatical structures are attempted, but there are errors in verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. More attention to grammatical accuracy is needed.

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