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Band 6+: Some people believe that traditional values are being lost as societies become more modern. Others think that modernization brings positive changes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, with a diffusion of the Internet, society commences to embrace unified customs and get an access to the immense variety of sources. The subject of whether cultural heritage is being left behind as society modernizes, or that modernization alters the nation from the positive side has recently been fiercely debated. This essay intends to discuss both perspectives profoundly, despite the fact that I advocate the latter viewpoint.

To begin with, as Western culture is emphasized in mass media, it eventuates in the cultural erosion, replacing many traditions and practices such as local ceremonies or family roles. For example, extended families were ubiquitous in the past, as for now most people prefer living in immediate families. Additionally, the recurring encouragement of individualism on the Internet leads to the development of a certain type of egoistic streak, as a result of which firm social ties weaken. However, the remarkable contributions of globalization is noteworthy as they have simplified a preponderance of conundrums, comprised of many complicated steps in order to be resolved.

First and foremost, modernization bestowed to world copious great opportunities to enhance oneself in all aspects. In hindrance, older generation had to rummage every library, much less each book simply to find the requisite for that moment information, whereas today, it is as simple as typing the question into a search engine. Furthermore, improved healthcare comes as an output of globalization as well. Advancements in technology have made it more convenient to monitor people’s wellbeing or detect the underlying diseases, offering contemporary methods of treatments and approaches to mentally unwell patients induced by the progress in medicine.

By way of conclusion, benefits’ magnitude of modernizing is indubitable, but people should not condone the loss of cultural values, so instead they ought to find out how to evolve conventions so that they mingle with modern standards without being distorted.

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