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Band 5+: A local college want people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to do this. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter • Explain what you would like to talk about • Say why students would be interested in your job • Suggest a possible date and time for the talk Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter for allowing me to be one of the alumni speakers in the upcoming placement fair at Northeastern College. I have been a student of Master’s in Analytics and I am currently working as a Business Analyst with Worley.

In my short speech, I would like to let me fellow junior students know the importance of practical knowledge over the theoretical part. I would like to share my experience of getting onboard for this job and also help them with certain significant tips and tricks to crack the interviews.

Being a Business Analyst is one of the most demanding careers today. It is an option for both technical and management students. Additionally, the job is well-paid.

Would it be possible to schedule my speech on April 4th, 10:00 am so that I can join my work post that?

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Niyati

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The content is relevant and fulfills the requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's structure is generally clear, but some improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance readability and cohesion. The grammar errors affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, demonstrating a good range of words. More precise and sophisticated language could elevate the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that impact clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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