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Band 5+: The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK ( expressed in percentage terms). summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph titled "Access to modern technology in the United Kingdom" with data from 1994/95 to 2008 on the x-axis and percentages on the y-axis, tracking the trends for CD player (increasing from 60% to 80%), DVD player (increasing from 0% to over 80%), Mobile phone (increasing from 20% to over 90%), and Internet connections (increasing from 0% to 70%).

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The line graph demonstrates the trends to modern devices in UK household from 1994 to 2008. Overal, all the devices had upward trends and the most popular gadge were CD player.

In 1994, about 45% of household in UK had a CD player. After the decade, it climbed just over 90% and stay the same until 2008. The mobile phone started with 18% in the years 1996/97. The percentage fluctuated but it became the second most popular device in 2002/03. Moreover, the overall trend of mobile phone upward at nearly 80% and then levelled of until 2008.

In 1998/99, nearly 10% of household were connected the intemet. After that, it increased significantly around 65% in 2008. The DVD player began near 30% in 200/03 and rose gradually almost just over 85% in 2008.

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Task Response

The report provides a good summary of the main features of the graph, but there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report states that the CD player was the most popular device, but the graph shows that the mobile phone was the most popular device in 2008. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is generally easy to follow, but there are some cohesion issues. For example, the transitions between paragraphs are not always smooth, and some sentences are not clearly linked to the previous or next sentence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocation. For example, 'gadge' should be 'device', and 'levelled of' should be 'levelled off'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The report uses a range of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors. For example, 'In 1994, about 45% of household in UK had a CD player' should be 'In 1994, about 45% of UK households had a CD player'.

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