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Band 7+: The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK ( expressed in percentage terms). summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph titled "Access to modern technology in the United Kingdom" with data from 1994/95 to 2008 on the x-axis and percentages on the y-axis, tracking the trends for CD player (increasing from 60% to 80%), DVD player (increasing from 0% to over 80%), Mobile phone (increasing from 20% to over 90%), and Internet connections (increasing from 0% to 70%).

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The graph provides information about the proportion of homes in the United Kingdom which had access to four types of modern technology between 1994/95 and 2008.

Overall, for all these four items, the percentages showed a clear upward trend. Another notable feature is that the percentage of households with a CD player in the UK was overtaken by that of internet connection in 2008.

In 1994/95, about 48% of homes had a CD player. This figure rose gradually to reach about 90% in 2004/05. This was little change in the percentage after that. The number of households with a mobile phone stood at under 20% and this also increased over the period and reached approximately 80% in 2004. After that, this figure also levelled off.

Turning to houses with internet connections the percentage rose from about 10% in 1998 to just over 60% in 2008. No figures are given for households with DVD players before 2002/03. The percentage rose steeply from around 30% at that time to about 80% in 2004/05. It then continued to increased gradually.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

percentage: 4

households: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons. The overview is clear, and the data is organized logically into paragraphs. To improve, ensure that all data points mentioned are consistent with the visual description provided, although the report handles the trends very well. The use of varied vocabulary to describe changes (e.g., 'rose gradually', 'rose steeply', 'levelled off') is a strength.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction, overview, and body paragraphs are logically structured. You have used cohesive devices effectively to transition between different technologies (e.g., 'Turning to...', 'After that...'). To reach a higher band, ensure that the connections between sentences are even more seamless and that the overview captures a broader sense of the comparative trends rather than just one specific intersection point.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurately describes the trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'rose gradually', 'levelled off', 'rose steeply'). However, there is some repetition of certain words like 'percentage' and 'figure'. To improve, try to incorporate more varied synonyms for 'proportion' or 'amount', and use more sophisticated collocations to describe the rate of change. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of structures, including complex sentences. Most sentences are error-free, but there are minor slips, such as 'This was little change' (which should be 'There was little change') and 'continued to increased' (which should be 'continued to increase'). Paying closer attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of infinitive forms will help elevate the grammatical precision.

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