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Band 6+: What should parents do if their children refuse to study?

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In my opinion, parents should inspire their children and motivate them in different ways. They can reward their children for their little achievements in academics or their work. This way, children become motivated and want to study.

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In my opinion parents should inspire their children and motivate them by different way. They can reward their children for their little achievements in their academic life or their work. By this children become motivated and they want to study.

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Task Response

The response is relevant to the question and provides a suggestion. However, it could benefit from exploring a wider range of approaches parents could take and offering more detailed explanations. Consider discussing alternative strategies beyond rewards, such as fostering a positive learning environment or addressing underlying issues that might be causing the refusal to study. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight repetition in the phrasing ('they want to study'). Improving the flow by using more sophisticated linking words would enhance the fluency.

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The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. More sophisticated vocabulary choices could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'different way,' consider 'various methods' or 'a range of strategies'.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'By this children become motivated...' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'In this way, children become motivated...' or 'This motivates children to study.' Using more complex sentence structures would improve the grammatical range.

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