Letter

Band 7+: 60 minutes remaining Submit Notepad Search for your note... Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear neighbours,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to discuss and find a solution to the parking area problems

I am Malik, the one living on 29 Wally Street. Recently, I had multiple difficulties taking my vehicle out of the parking bay cause by the gaps between each car were too close. I understand that our parking spaces are limited, and I am pretty sure I am not the only one who’s experienced this issue, I personally think we need to draw a line in the road to mark parking spaces to make sure that every vehicle has comfortable spaces to park and get out. Moreover, it would be great if we could have a meeting this weekend, at 3 pm at my place, to talk about this, and everyone can express their problems regarding the parking area and find a solution together. I am looking forward to seeing everyone.

warm regard

Malik

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

parking: 5

spaces: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, explaining the parking problems, suggesting solutions, and proposing a meeting. The tone is appropriate for a letter to neighbours. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the problems and solutions, and perhaps offering alternative meeting times to accommodate more people.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the purpose is clear from the beginning. The progression of ideas is logical, moving from problem explanation to suggested solutions and a meeting proposal. To improve coherence, consider adding transitional phrases to smoothly connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. For example, you could use phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to' to link related points more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. To enhance lexical resource, try incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to parking and community problem-solving. For instance, instead of 'problems,' you could use 'challenges' or 'inconveniences.' Instead of 'comfortable spaces,' consider 'adequate parking spaces.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. To further improve grammatical accuracy, pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. For example, in the sentence 'cause by the gaps,' it should be 'caused by the gaps.' Also, ensure consistency in tense usage throughout the letter.

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