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Band 6+: A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: apologise for it explain what you are doing on that date suggest to him/her an alternate time to come

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Dear Mohammed,

Hope you are doing great in your exams. I was excited to know your plans of visiting Hyderabad next week. I am writing to you let you know that I won’t be able to give you company during your visit. However, I will be free in October, I want you to change your plans and postpone it for a month.

I apologize for not being able to receive you. Since my sister is getting married next week, I must be present at her weeding. I cannot afford to miss the it, also, the wedding date cannot be changed.

However, if you can delay your trip and visit my place the coming month, I can make sure you will have a pleasant stay with me. Additionally, I have already decided to take you to all the important historic landmarks. Moreover, visit to these cultural heritage sites will help you score good in your history assignment.

Hoping that you understand my situation and will come along next month.

Best wishes

Fatima

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

visit: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by apologizing for not being available on the planned date, explaining the reason for unavailability, and suggesting an alternate time for the visit. To improve, consider explicitly stating the current date of the friend's visit and providing a warm closing remark.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized and connected. The use of transition words could further enhance the flow of the letter. Additionally, consider breaking the letter into more distinct paragraphs for better readability.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used appropriately throughout the letter. To enhance lexical resource, try incorporating more varied synonyms and expressions. Additionally, pay attention to minor errors such as 'weeding' instead of 'wedding'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used accurately. Some minor punctuation errors are present, such as missing commas in certain places. Proofreading for punctuation and tense consistency is recommended.

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