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Band 6+: A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to provide my feedback on the question that was posted by TCS company on last Saturday in social media platform on how to spend companies funds wisely.

There are certain benefits of funding money to sports team. One of them is, it would be a great encouragement for children to actively participate rather than thinking of how to request parents for the fees. Another significant advantage is, some kids may develop a strong interest and can make sports as their career, which is great advantage for the nation.

On the other hand, open-air concerts are a great way to unwind from busy schedules. Generally there would be no government funding to encourage live concerts, so this payment helps people to attend concerts at free of cost and also to relieve mental stress.

I would like you to spend money in a proportinonate way, that is three-fourth of the allocated money to kids sports team and remaining to live concerts. So that both the parties will be benefited.

Thank you for your time.

Yours faithfully,

John Smith.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

concerts: 4

money: 3

sports: 3

would: 3

great: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three bullet points: it describes benefits of sponsoring the sports team, summarizes benefits of the concerts, and gives a clear opinion on how the money should be spent. The purpose is clear and the tone is appropriate. However, there are some lapses: the opening could be more concise and formal, and the final recommendation is somewhat vague ('proportionate way') and could be more specific. Additionally, there are minor grammatical and spelling errors (e.g., 'proportinonate', 'companies funds'). To improve, ensure the letter is fully developed with more detailed reasoning and check for accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is logically organized with clear paragraphs for each required point. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion (e.g., 'on last Saturday in social media platform' and 'spend money in a proportinonate way'). The introduction could be more concise, and the conclusion is abrupt. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and smoother transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and generally appropriate for the task, with some good phrases like 'great encouragement' and 'relieve mental stress'. However, there are several errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'proportinonate way', 'posted by TCS company', 'request parents for the fees'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and natural vocabulary, and proofread for spelling and word form errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('on last Saturday', 'in social media platform'), incorrect verb forms ('would be a great encouragement'), and awkward phrasing ('how to spend companies funds wisely'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the overall accuracy needs improvement. To improve, focus on sentence structure, article usage, and subject-verb agreement.

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