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Band 6+: Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing to express my interest for the computer course. I have heard from my one of my friend that our university will start the computer course from next week. I am passionate about taking part in this course, as I am a big fan of computer. But unfortunately, I did not get a chance to learn about this.

Actually, I did not finish my elementary course because I had to work for long hours to get funds for the medical cost of my fathers’ illness. I know that elementary cousre is necessary for enrolment of computer course. I want to ask you, if possible then let me participate in the class and i will assure that I will take part in every class and get a great marks. I do not want to miss any class and I heard a lot about your academic services and great reputation.

I look forward to hearing from your favorable response.

Yours faithfully,

Chris Paul

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

computer: 4

about: 3

class: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The explanation of the reason for writing, the description of circumstances, and the request for an exception are all present. However, the response could be more concise and direct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and more logical transitions between ideas. The grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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