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Band 4+: LOOK AT THE GRAPH BELOW. IT SHOWS THE CHANGES IN THE BOOK SALES IN THE UK IN MILLIONS BETWEEN 2000 AND 2002. DESCRIBE THE GRAPH BY WRITING A PARAGRAPH REFERRING TO THE MAIN FEATURES. (MINIMUM 120 WORDS)

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The image depicts three categories of book sales in the UK in millions from 2000 to 2002: 2000 figures are Romance 4m, History 2.5m, Detective 1.5m; 2001 figures are Romance 2.5m, History 4m, Detective 3m; 2002 figures are Romance 3m, History 1.5m, Detective 2.5m.

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The graph illustrate the changes in the book sales in the uk in millions from 2002 to 2002

Overall,in the past romance books were sales more then others , after the time history books were dramatically went up , however the few buyers were detective books

in 2000 romance books sales more 4 millions while this dramatically decline from 4 millions to 2.5 millions in 2001 however in 2002 romance books started increase reach 3.5 millions were sold, at the same time history books in 2000 were sold around 2,4 millions in contrast in 2001 were dramatically grew appoximataly 4.4millions but in 2002 suddenly decrease from 4.4 to 1.5 millions

in 2000 detective books were sold a litlle around 2 millions the next year it was stability however in 2002 detective books dramatically grow up become around 3 millions

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millions: 8

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dramatically: 4

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romance: 3

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detective: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in book sales over the three years. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., romance in 2002 is given as 3.5 million instead of 3 million, history in 2000 as 2.4 million instead of 2.5 million, detective in 2000 as 2 million instead of 1.5 million) and some irrelevant or unclear statements (e.g., 'from 2002 to 2002'). The overall structure is present but could be clearer. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key figures and trends, and ensure the report is well-organized with clear comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical progression. Ideas are presented in a confusing manner, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and often incorrect. Consider structuring the report with a clear overview and separate paragraphs for each category or time period. Use linking words appropriately to improve flow.

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The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with several inaccuracies (e.g., 'sales more', 'dramatically went up', 'a litlle'). There is limited range and lack of precision. To improve, learn and use a variety of synonyms for describing trends (e.g., 'rose', 'fell', 'peaked', 'remained stable') and ensure correct word forms.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('graph illustrate'), tense issues, incorrect word order, and punctuation problems. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on. Focus on basic grammar rules, practice writing simple and complex sentences correctly, and proofread carefully.

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