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Band 6+: Percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

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The image shows two pie charts comparing the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France for the years 1990 and 2010. In 1990, Coal was at 17%, Oil 27%, Natural Gas 22%, Hydro Power 20%, and Nuclear Power 14%. In 2010, Coal decreased to 13%, Oil significantly reduced to 13%, Natural Gas dropped to 10%, Hydro Power remained the same at 20%, and Nuclear Power surged to 67%.

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The two pie charts give information about the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France between 1990 and 2010.

It is clear that overall, in 1990, coal and natural gas contributed the most to electricity production, while hydro power had the smallest share. By 2010, nuclear power had become largest sector, during this year hydro power again had the least contribution.

Oil, which made up nearly a quarter of electricity’s production by fuel source in 1990, declined significantly to 13% by 2010. Coal and natural gas sectors also experienced dramatically decreases, with their contribution falling from 28% and again 28% to 13% and 4%.

Hydro power had the least contribution both year, but it experienced slightly decreased from 6% to 2% between 1990 and 2010. Nuclear power reached a peak with under 67 percent in France’s fuel resources in 2010.

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the pie charts and makes relevant comparisons between the two years. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, such as the contributions of coal and natural gas in 1990, and hydro power's contribution. Also, the report could benefit from a more structured approach, perhaps grouping similar trends together. To improve, ensure data accuracy and consider a more thematic organization of the information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report generally presents a clear overview of the data. However, the organization could be improved. For instance, grouping similar trends (increases/decreases) together would enhance coherence. Transitions between sentences could also be smoother to improve the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the trends in the pie charts. However, there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'contribution,' synonyms like 'share,' 'proportion,' or 'percentage' could be incorporated. Also, consider using more specific adjectives and adverbs to describe the changes (e.g., 'a slight decrease' instead of 'slightly decreased').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, there are issues with subject-verb agreement ('coal and natural gas sectors also experienced dramatically decreases'), incorrect use of articles ('the least contribution both year'), and inaccurate percentage figures ('Hydro power had the least contribution both year, but it experienced slightly decreased from 6% to 2% between 1990 and 2010'). Correcting these errors and ensuring accurate grammar and punctuation will significantly improve the report's overall quality.

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